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I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby TheLesPaul101 » 12 Dec 2011, 17:38

My best friend wants me to write her a song and so i agreed. I know what all of the insturments are doing but the lyrics have me stuck.

Everytime i think of lyrics, the song turns to a love song for some reason. I've tried looking it up but most people's techniques just aren't workin for me.

Any help will be greatly appreciated! I sorta need some replies fast because i have been working on this for about 2 weeks now. I have tried and tried again but nothings working. Sorry to put pressure on some of you guys.
Thank you so much yall!!!
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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby slash-ed » 12 Dec 2011, 23:12

Just write the love song.
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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby TheLesPaul101 » 13 Dec 2011, 13:27

But i don't love her. We're really good friends but we don't like each other like that
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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby slowpokerhino » 13 Dec 2011, 18:20

TheLesPaul101 wrote:But i don't love her. We're really good friends but we don't like each other like that
Write a song about that.
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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby TheLesPaul101 » 14 Dec 2011, 04:23

? Hey thanks! that might work but i don't exactly know how...
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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby guitarest » 21 Jan 2012, 11:04

Redo the following like "I faulking hate her"..... lol

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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby hedas46 » 21 Jan 2012, 18:44

Maybe you do love her. You just never realised.

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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby JkGriffin » 21 Jan 2012, 18:58

hedas46 wrote:Maybe you do love her. You just never realised.
Then this song might end up feeling weird one someone :bgrin
If not... well... maybe she wanted him to write her a song to find out if there is something more?

Mind your steps :think

But you can see if you can implement things as:
How long you've known her?
When/where did you first meet?
Did you go to school together?
You done anything cool together?
Has she helped you through a difficult time in some way?
Do a "Elton John" as in "Your Song". Like "Here is my humble song. It's not best in the world, but it's my best... I only wish my best was good enough for a friend like you". (feel free to use if you see any value in it, use and tweak to your liking).

Don't know if that helps... but hope it does...

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Re: I need help writing a song!!!!!!!!

Postby Burner » 22 Jan 2012, 03:02

Got a good chorus for you...

Think GnR Chorus from I used to love her...

I Dont love ya, but I want to f**k ya! Hahaha
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